What do you think of this one? I call it Revision 8.
Dear <--whomever it's aimed at-->:
Locarno didn't want to do anything other than study sorcery. Neither did he want to take the role of mankind's savior; but, unwillingly, he became our only hope against Dies Irae. Dies Irae, a secret society, wants to destroy civilization--if they can reduce man to a state of barbarism they believe God will destroy the world. By undertaking a magical ritual that will enhance his power, Locarno can defeat Dies Irae. However the process is flawed: it'll cost him his soul, and his soul wants to be reunited with his body. Should body and soul reunite, all his power will be lost and Dies Irae cannot be stopped.
MEMORIES OF THE DEAD, a young adult/fantasy novel, is complete at 72,000 words.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you.